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IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Essay Sample Band 5
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The essay addresses the task but lacks depth in idea development and coherence. Grammar and vocabulary usage are basic, with several errors affecting clarity and formality.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 36 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 15 | |
| Lexical resource | 14 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 4 |
Question
Online education has become more prevalent in recent years, offering learners from around the world the opportunity to pursue their studies remotely.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of online education.
#Online Education
#Advantage / Disadvantage
Submitted Answer
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Thesis Statement
21st
century, online education has risen up along with the technology. There is trend among educational organization around the globe to teach
their students virtually. In recent years
, we can see alot
of advantages of teaching
through internet but there is negative side too which should not be ignored.Recent outbreak of
covid 19
can be one of the example of advantage. In the period of corona, people were not able to go to school and attend the class physically
so teaching
through the zoom and other video chat app was only
alternative to teach
at that time. If we talk about
convienence
, studying virtually is more easier
than attending the classroom. When someone study through online
then they dont
have to waste their time because they dont
have to travel to the school or colleges. Reading through means of communication also result in cost saving as we dont
have to build any infrastructures. Students will also be more familiar towards
the technolog
as well.By looking the benefits
it
may seem that it does not having
any disadvantages, but it is not true. Firstly, spending more time on screen
of electronic devices can cause certain health problems like eye strain, headache and back pain. Secondly, study done on 2020 by group of researcher from ohio
university shows that student lacks focus in study while attending the online classes. Thirdly, businesses like educational organization, company
that produces
the raw material for learning goes in loss as demand for their product decreases.In conclusion, we can admit that online education has
alot
to offer the learners but
it comes along with some negative points also
.