IELTS Essay Checker - Sample Band 5.5
IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Band 5.5 | IELTS Essay Sample Band 5.5
5.5
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The essay addresses the task but lacks depth and specific examples. Grammar and vocabulary need improvement, and the essay's coherence and cohesion could be enhanced with better structure and transitions.
| Overall score | 5.5 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 6.0 |
| Total Errors | 34 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 12 | |
| Lexical resource | 13 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 5 |
Question
As digital marketing continues to evolve, traditional businesses often struggle to keep up, potentially losing market share to more digitally savvy competitors.
Discuss the challenges faced by traditional businesses due to digital marketing and suggest ways they can adapt to remain competitive.
#Business & Money
#Problem / Solution
Submitted Answer
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Words:227
Paragraphs:2
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Thesis Statement
digitalization
grows and getting bigger overtime, businesses
should be run not only as usual but with a lot of innovation. Digital
marketing
will be an important things
to be done by all businesses
today. People who run traditional
busnesses
can not
sit idly and complaining
about the growth of digital
marketing
which might potentially decrease their market share. Instead, traditional
businesses
should try to learn digital
marketing
if they want their businesses
grow or even getting
bigger in capital. The challenges that can be faced by traditional
businesses
mostly is the willing to move and transform the businesess
. We, as the world changes, should adapt with
the situation and the changes made by a lot of digitalization
. As industrialization has change
the world in the 19th century, people needs
to adapt to the digitalization
if they do not want to struggle
.Innovation and the willingness to learn new things will be the key of success for
traditional
businesses
to compete in the digital
era. Learning and doing digital
marketing
is a must and can not
be avoided by any business
who want
to compete in this era of digitalization
. As digitlization
also offer
a lot of easy way to learn new things through Youtube
or even another digital
platform, one should not just complaining
about condition but try to adapt and grow stronger.