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IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Essay Sample Band 5

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The essay addresses the question but lacks a clear thesis statement and sufficient examples. Grammar and vocabulary need improvement, and the essay should be more formal and cohesive.
Overall score5.0
Grammatical range and accuracy4.0
Lexical resource5.0
Coherence & cohesion5.0
Task response5.0
Total Errors25
Grammatical range and accuracy6
Lexical resource10
Coherence & cohesion4
Task response5
Question
Addressing climate change requires action at various levels. Some argue that individuals can make significant contributions through lifestyle choices, whereas others believe that the responsibility primarily lies with governments to create systemic changes.
To what extent do you think individual actions versus government policies contribute to combating climate change?
#Climate Change
#Direct Question
Submitted Answer
English:UK English
Words:188
Paragraphs:3
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Thesis Statement
As the climate
change
get worse every year. At this
point
everyone should contribute to
making
some
changes
, from the small
changes
that can be done by individuals
untill
complex
changes
that can be done by an organization or by
government
itself.
There's
a quote
said "
small
changes
can
make
big impact". Even if we think that an act is not
gonna
seen or affect, we should not stop to keep
making
small
changes
. And as a human, we
can not
let the good seeds just grow on our garden. We have to spread those seeds. So that everyone can
do
the
changes
too. And the bigger the group, the bigger the
changes
, so does the impact. It always started by one person that have
a courage
to spread it, and everyone is possible to be that one person.
The
government
is an image of their people. The more wise and the people, the better the
government
. As the people started to
make
some
changes
like their
lifestyle
even
demonstartion
to the
government
to speak up about climate
change
.
Government
can change the policies about climate
changes
.

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