IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Band 5
IELTS Essay Sample Band 5
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The essay addresses the question but lacks a clear thesis statement and sufficient examples. Grammar and vocabulary need improvement, and the essay should be more formal and cohesive.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 4.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 25 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 6 | |
| Lexical resource | 10 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 5 |
Question
Addressing climate change requires action at various levels. Some argue that individuals can make significant contributions through lifestyle choices, whereas others believe that the responsibility primarily lies with governments to create systemic changes.
To what extent do you think individual actions versus government policies contribute to combating climate change?
#Climate Change
#Direct Question
Submitted Answer
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Words:188
Paragraphs:3
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Thesis Statement
change
get worse every year. At this point
everyone should contribute to making
some changes
, from the small changes
that can be done by individuals untill
complex changes
that can be done by an organization or by government
itself.There's
a quote said "
small changes
can make
big impact". Even if we think that an act is not gonna
seen or affect, we should not stop to keep making
small changes
. And as a human, we can not
let the good seeds just grow on our garden. We have to spread those seeds. So that everyone can do
the changes
too. And the bigger the group, the bigger the changes
, so does the impact. It always started by one person that have a courage
to spread it, and everyone is possible to be that one person.The
government
is an image of their people. The more wise and the people, the better the government
. As the people started to make
some changes
like their lifestyle
even demonstartion
to the government
to speak up about climate change
. Government
can change the policies about climate changes
.