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IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Band 6 | IELTS Essay Sample Band 6

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The essay addresses the task but lacks a clear thesis statement and has limited idea development. Grammar and vocabulary are adequate but could be improved for greater precision and variety.
Overall score6.0
Grammatical range and accuracy5.0
Lexical resource6.0
Coherence & cohesion6.0
Task response6.0
Total Errors36
Grammatical range and accuracy10
Lexical resource17
Coherence & cohesion4
Task response5

Writing Task

#Media & Advertising
#Agree / Disagree
Advertising has become ubiquitous, with consumers exposed to numerous ads daily. This constant exposure raises questions regarding its impact on consumer choices and overall well-being.
To what extent do you agree or disagree that advertising positively influences consumer well-being?

Submitted Answer

Words236|Paragraphs3
English:UK English
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Thesis Statement
Advertising has become ubiquitous, with
consumers
exposed
to numerous
ads
daily.
People
tend to
see
more
ads
daily than they used to
see
years ago. This has happened due to technology being evolved. Nowadays,
people
are more
exposed
to social media apps like
Youtube
, Instagram,
twitter
,
snapchat
where they can
see
adverstisements
tailored to their needs and choices.
Today, we are more
exposed
to the internet, our data is being shared over the internet through social media. We are constantly being monitored over the
internet
which helps apps to
analyze
our choices and share those
ads
with us. For example, if you like to watch action movies,
youtube
will suggest you different
type of action movies
through
ads
. Similarly, if you are looking for new shoes over
instagram
, you will be
exposed
to different brands of shoes through
ads
. It impacts
cosumer
choices overall, by
seeing
ads
all day
people
get influenced and tend to buy a particular good.
Ads
also motivate
people
when
you
see
your favourite influencer
endrosing
particular product, you tend to buy it or use it.
Overall,
ads
have
positive
influence over
consumer
well being
but
sometimes
it can be harmful for
consumer
. Wastage of money is an important concern being raised. Another concern is a bad influence among young generation through
ads
. Therefore, it should be limited for certain age of group and should be less for
well being
of
consumers
.

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