IELTS Essay Checker - Sample Band 5
IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Essay Sample Band 5
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The essay provides a partial response to the task, with some relevant points and an example, but lacks clarity and coherence in argumentation. Grammar and vocabulary usage are basic, with several errors affecting readability and overall effectiveness.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 27 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 7 | |
| Lexical resource | 12 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 4 |
Question
Celebrity endorsements are a common strategy used to enhance product appeal and credibility.
Do you agree or disagree that celebrity endorsements significantly enhance the credibility of products?
#Media & Advertising
#Agree / Disagree
Submitted Answer
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I do partially agree with the given statement as
although
it helps to put a great impact on the audience about
product
's quality, sometimes, it happens in a wrong way as they do not use services they promote, on their own.
Commencing with the supportive points why I am in the favour that superstars' in actual boost the appealing of sold goods. Firstly, celebrities are the most popular
persons
on social media
having a million followers on different sites such as Instagram, Facebook and Twitter. Most of the population have started following their daily routines; dresssing
sense, meals, hairstyles and living style as well instead of thinking about expenses. So, a lot of individuals always get ready to try any product
provided that it is advertised by their favourite celebrity. For example, a famous punjabi
instagram
star Gurkirat Randhawa have
5 million followers who follow her for her dressing style and makeup choices. Hence, whenever she posts anything for advertising any makeup artist, ladies start searching for that artist and try them. Hence
they paly
crucial
role to enhance
the quality of things.However, all the renowned people do promotions, obviously for money.
Occasionaly
, they personally don't
verify the originaltiy
of products
and services they appeal for. In some cases, their followers may get cheated and left over with wastage of money as they just have been
buying the products
as directed on social media. I think they should not only first verify the product
details but also try on themselves and then promote it after satisfaction.To conclude, even though superstars and famous celebrities have great role to make selling goods appealing and for increasing the sales, they only do it for money as it is their passion. I suggest they should check
product
details, before they are going to do its promotion.