IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 5
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5 (General Training)
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Overall Feedback
The letter addresses the task but lacks formality and contains several grammatical errors. Coherence and cohesion are affected by the lack of clear paragraphing and transitions, while vocabulary is limited and informal.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 37 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 11 | |
| Lexical resource | 17 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 5 |
Writing Task
#Travel Plans
#Informal
You are going on a business trip and want to extend it for leisure. Write a letter to your friend.
Explain your business trip schedule.
Suggest some leisure activities you can do together.
Ask if they are available to join you.
Submitted Answer
Words109|Paragraphs11
English:
Global Issues:
Word Count Requirement
Formality Match
Readability
Coherence
Cohesion
Vocabulary Usage
Grammar Range
Logical Flow
Incorrect or Missing Opening
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
valois
fernandes
house no 69/k
agonda -
goa
subject
Dear Pearl,
im writing to you because
i
have a bussiness
trip to margaon
from march
20th to 22nd . its
a pretty standard affair meeting
and presentations during the day. however
, i
was thinking of extending my stay untill
the 24th to explore goa
a bit .i was wondering if you'd be free to join me?
we
could check out some places , go on a ride, visite
beaches or their local markets . well
i
also look for some of the suggestions from yours
side too.looking for a letter with a positive yes .
yours
sincerly
,thanking you
valois
fernandes