IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 5
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5 (General Training)
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The letter addresses the task but lacks formality and contains several grammatical errors. Coherence and cohesion are affected by informal language and abrupt transitions, while vocabulary is limited and repetitive.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 4.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 33 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 12 | |
| Lexical resource | 14 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 4 |
Question
You recently visited a local gym and were unhappy with the facilities. Write a letter to the gym manager.
Describe the problems you encountered
Explain why these issues are important
Suggest ways to improve the facilities
#Service Feedback
#Semi-Formal
Submitted Answer
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hey.
I recently visited your gym ,and want to tell about some problems that
i
encountered
just to give positive feedback for the overall improvement of the gym.The biggest problem that
i
had was to find
the specific weights
that need
for my bench press training.All of the
weights
are scatterd
all the over the gym to the point that i
got
out of zone every time
i
need to search for a weight
.Another issue that just pissed me off is the long waiting for every
time
i
have some sessions in the cardio machines ,and that why i
got
too late to my next meeting with friends every friday
night.So in short
i
got
out zone
every time
i
need
wieghts
and got
late every time
on my friday
night neeting
with my friends because of the long waiting to got my finishing cardio.I Suggest you bring on more
weights
and get
them organise
so that they become easy to find , Also if you get
more cardio machines it will reduce the waiting time
to get
into one of them.Warm regards.
Ahmed.