IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 5

IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5 (General Training)

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07 Nov 24, 18:09
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The letter addresses the task but lacks coherence and cohesion, with abrupt transitions and informal language. Grammar errors and limited vocabulary usage affect clarity and formality, which should be improved for a semi-formal letter.
Overall score5.0
Grammatical range and accuracy4.0
Lexical resource5.0
Coherence & cohesion5.0
Task response5.0
Total Errors28
Grammatical range and accuracy7
Lexical resource11
Coherence & cohesion5
Task response5
Question
Your friend is getting married and you want to congratulate them. Write a letter to your friend.
Congratulate them on their engagement
Express your happiness for them
Offer to help with any wedding preparations
#Friend Meeting
#Informal
Submitted Answer
English:UK English
Words:105
Paragraphs:8
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hey Ali
Finally our dream come true and
iam
here to
congrate
you for your engagement.
Ican not find a word to describe how happy and
greatfull
iam
now after knowing the blessing news of you getting
engage
.
I will make
letter
short and sweet , All of
assessts
, savings and myself is yours
untill
your wedding
complate
, I will send you my visa card details in your
whatsapp
and if you need
more help
just send me a message there.
Do not think twice to
ask
of
any kind of help if you need any help.
happy to hear back from you.
Warm regards,
Ahmed

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