IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5.5
(General Training)
IELTS Letter Sample Band 5.5
5.5
Overall Score
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The letter addresses all the bullet points but lacks formality and contains several grammatical errors. The coherence and cohesion are decent, but the vocabulary is quite basic and informal. Improving grammar and using more varied vocabulary would enhance the letter significantly.
| Overall score | 5.5 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 26 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 13 | |
| Lexical resource | 4 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 4 |
Question
You are getting married and want to invite your best friend. Write a letter to your best friend.
Tell them the wedding date and location
Explain why you want them to be there
Discuss any special roles you would like them to play
#Wedding Invitation
#Informal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:113
Paragraphs:3
Word Count Requirement
Formality
Readability
Coherence
Cohesion
Vocabulary Usage
Grammar Range
Logical Flow
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
dear mega
hey girl!
i
know this is something that we both been waiting for, and finally the day has come. i
would like to invite you to my wedding, and you will be my bridesmate
. exiting
right? i
really do hope you'll come to my wedding, because
we've been friends since we were little and
you played a big role in my life, as someone who was always by my side. my
wedding is on the 21st of June 2035, at the Voyage hotel in Bali. do
n't worry about tickets or hotel, because
i
have reserved everything for you. ca
n't wait to see you!from your
bestfriend
, Nai.