IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5
(General Training)
IELTS Letter Sample Band 5
5.0
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The letter covers the main points but lacks proper grammar and punctuation. The coherence and cohesion are moderate, but the vocabulary is limited and informal. Improvements in grammar and a more structured approach would enhance the overall quality.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 4.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 29 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 10 | |
| Lexical resource | 10 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 5 |
Question
Your friend is having a birthday barbecue, and you are helping to organize it. Write an informal letter to another friend inviting them to the barbecue.
Explain whose birthday it is.
Mention the date and time of the barbecue.
Describe the location and any food or drink arrangements.
#Birthday Invitation
#Informal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:106
Paragraphs:4
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dear
ahmed
,i would like to invite you to one of my best friend
abdullah
birthday barbecue.it has everything you need from swimming pools ,loud music,drinks like pepsi
, cola and other soft drinks. did
i
mention that there will be a huge playground for the kid? we
will be serving foods like steaks,burgers,fries,salads and even more did
i
also mention that chef gordon ramsay
will be the cook for this event? you
should definetly
come to the party. the
party starts at 12 am at my house in riyadh
as suwaidi
district and invite all your friends and family.simcerly,
mohammed