IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5.5
(General Training)
IELTS Letter Sample Band 5.5
5.5
Overall Score
15 Jul 24, 05:58
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The letter addresses all the required points but has several grammatical errors and lacks proper capitalization. The coherence and cohesion are good, but the vocabulary usage is somewhat limited and could be more varied.
| Overall score | 5.5 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 23 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 11 | |
| Lexical resource | 3 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 4 |
Question
You have decided to resign from your current job due to receiving a better job offer. Write a formal resignation letter.
State your intention to resign
Mention the reason for your resignation
Provide your last working day
Express gratitude for the opportunity
#Resignation Letter
#Formal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:105
Paragraphs:4
Word Count Requirement
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Coherence
Cohesion
Vocabulary Usage
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Logical Flow
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
dear Mr.
Agung
,i am writing to formally resign from my position as a supervisor at Pertamina effective on 1st
august
2024. i
have made this decision after careful consideration and believe it is the right time for me to pursue new opportunities. i
have recently been offered and have accepted a position with another company. i
am commited
to ensuring a smooth transition. i
am willing to assist in training my replacement and completing any outstanding projects before my departure. thank
you once again for the opportunity to be a part of Pertamina. i
wish the company continued success in the future.sincerely,
Ferry