IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 5
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5 (General Training)
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Overall Feedback
The letter addresses the task but lacks clarity and structure, with several grammatical errors and informal language. Improving sentence structure and using more varied vocabulary would enhance coherence and task achievement.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 4.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 44 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 21 | |
| Lexical resource | 12 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6 | |
| Task response | 5 |
Writing Task
#Travel Booking
#Informal
You are planning a trip with your family and have been researching different travel options. Write a letter to your friend asking for their opinion on the best travel booking sites.
Mention the destination and type of trip
Ask for their recommendations on travel booking sites
Inquire about their past experiences with these sites
Submitted Answer
Words144|Paragraphs4
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dear Ahmad
I hope you are doing well
!.
its
been long
time we
have not catch up. I wanted to take advice from you .me and my
family
are going
for
family
trip
and
i
told them about your
family
trip
to
hunza
which you mentioned when we meet .
i
have not made any booking for my
trip
.
i
am here writing to you for your opinion from where
i
should
booked
my
family
trip
and where .you have experienced and tell me about the websites from where
i
can
booked
trip
.I have searched some websites but
its
not
effeicient
also inform me
hows
your
family
trip
was?
the
place you visited is good,?
what
about the weather ,enviornment
and the most important thing
what about the accomandation
?may you and your family
enjoying
good health!.
bye
bye take carebest regards
afshan