IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 6
(General Training)
IELTS Letter Sample Band 6
6.0
Overall Score
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The letter addresses all tasks but has several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Coherence and cohesion are generally maintained, but some sentences are unclear. Vocabulary is adequate but could be more varied and precise.
| Overall score | 6.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 6.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 13 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 4 | |
| Lexical resource | 4 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 2 |
Question
You have moved to a new house and want to inform your childhood friend.
Describe the new house and its features
Explain why you chose this particular place
Share your impressions of the neighborhood
#New Home Notice
#Informal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:204
Paragraphs:9
Readability
Coherence
Cohesion
Vocabulary Usage
Grammar Range
Logical Flow
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Tommy,
Since you moved to the UK last year, I
haven
heard nothing about you. How do you find your life?Not too long ago, I relocated to a new residence. My house has two bedrooms, one kitchen and bathroom, a dining
room
and a sitting room
. The dining room
appeals most to me since it is really roomy and comfortable. Made of glass and steel, a contemporary square table offers us somewhere to congregate and share our happiness. Right on top of it hung a tasteful chandelier that accentuates the room
.But I usually stay in my bedroom, which features a cushioned single bed and a working table with
book shelves
. There
I may listen to music or enjoy computer games.Wanchai is where I live now. Moving to there is near the centre of Hong Kong Island, so my family and I do. Nearby are several stores
so
I may make purchases whenever I wanted.But given it's an urban location, the noise bothers me really a lot. Until I close all windows, I cannot focus. Still, it is difficult to have everything perfect. Every choice has benefits as well as drawbacks, hasn't it?
Anticipate your response.
Good regards,
Samson.