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IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5 (General Training)
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The letter addresses the main points but lacks coherence and has several grammatical errors. Vocabulary is basic and repetitive, and the structure could be improved for better readability and flow.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 4.0 |
| Total Errors | 31 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 9 | |
| Lexical resource | 11 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 6 |
Question
You recently booked a hotel through a travel website, but upon arrival, you found the hotel was under renovation. Write a letter to the website's customer service.
Describe your experience upon arrival at the hotel.
Explain how the renovations affected your stay.
Request a refund or alternative accommodation.
#Travel Booking
#Semi-Formal
Submitted Answer
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Words:199
Paragraphs:6
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To, xx Hotel Establishment
Adress xx
Good Morning. I am Joshua, from Indonesia and
im
planning on staying at your hotel
for the next couple of days, as listed on these
receipt and order confirmation below:
*ORDER CONFIRMATIOIN*
However,
i
'm
aware that your hotel
is currently on
renovation
process. Upon
ariving
at 10:30 (estimated time),
there's
a
few construction worker
outside your
hotel
lobby, and despite your front office employee telling me that the renovation
won't
affect the experience of me staying here that much,
i
was quite bothered by the sound and few bits of debris coming from the construction material.
The pool area is also closed, whila
some of the parking space was taken by your construction material carrier vehicle. The room was clean and overall fine, but the disturbing sound can be bothersome, especially when i
don't
know how much you guys planning on renovating and also the working hours of the renovation. I am deeply amused and dissapointed
of this issue, and would like to get a full refund, as i
am not going to stay at your hotel
. Please get back to me as soon as possible.Regards, Joshua