IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 7
(General Training)
IELTS Letter Sample Band 7
7.0
Overall Score
06 Aug 24, 07:18
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Overall Feedback
The letter effectively addresses the tasks and maintains a semi-formal tone. However, there are minor grammatical errors and some sentences could be more cohesive. Vocabulary usage is adequate but could be more varied to enhance the overall quality.
| Overall score | 7.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 7.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 7.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 7.0 | |
| Task response | 6.0 |
| Total Errors | 10 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 3 | |
| Lexical resource | 1 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 3 |
Question
You want to participate in a short-term workshop related to your field of study. Write a letter to the workshop organizer.
Explain your interest in the workshop
Provide relevant background about your studies
Ask about the registration process
#Study Plan
#Semi-Formal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:138
Paragraphs:6
Word Count Requirement
Readability
Coherence
Cohesion
Vocabulary Usage
Grammar Range
Logical Flow
Incorrect or Missing Opening
To whom this may concern,
As I recently enrolled in the university of my dreams and am officially a computer science student there. I have wanted to join your computer science workshop for a while as it will help me in my later studies.
I already have some prior knowledge of the
subject
as I have worked on multiple projects that involved coding and building robots in the past. I feel like I will benefit from this workshop as it will give me a new perspective on the subject and how I can work more effectively on future projects.I have some inquiries about the registration process as the instructions were not clear to me on your official website
so
I would be grateful if you would contact me to discuss this further.Thank you,
Safaa Ahmed Sobh