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IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5 (General Training)

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The letter addresses the task but lacks coherence and cohesion, with abrupt transitions and unclear structure. Grammar and vocabulary usage are limited, with several errors affecting clarity and formality, such as 'inconvenients' and 'succesed'.

Overall score	5.0
Grammatical range and accuracy	5.0
Lexical resource	5.0
Coherence & cohesion	5.0
Task response	5.0

Writing Task

#Travel Delay Complaint

#Formal

You were delayed on a bus trip due to poor management. Write a letter to the bus company.

give details of the bus trip

describe the issues you faced

explain what you want the company to do

Submitted Answer

Words207|Paragraphs8

English:

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To whom it might concern;

This complaint letter is being written due to the following

incovenients

at the

company

bus

trip was scheduled to

iniciate

at 4PM, arriving at the destination at 5PM: City of Asuncion.

The

bus

was scheduled to pick up

passengers

at 4PM, the

bus

arrived at 4:30PM, at the moment of validating the tickets, all

passengers

were affected by a system

error, therefore,

the trip was rescheduled to 5PM. During the travelling process, a tire started to present

inconvennients

, due to

this mistake, all

passengers

were moved to another

bus

, wasting more time.

My persona and surroundings were affected by this whole horrible experience at the

company

, the

cancelation

of a crucial reunion was

commited

due to this.

The poor management in this

company

unnacceptable

, the

company

is required to reimburse all tickets in this trip, and offer a money compensation of no less than 500$ to each of the

passengers

affected. In the case of these requirements not being

succesed

, a corresponding legal process will begin. All the necessary evidence will be provided if asked, after all this being said.

I'll

look forward to a response, I am opened agreeing to another solution.

My email: examplemail@gmail.com

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Total Errors	24
Grammatical range and accuracy	3
Lexical resource	13
Coherence & cohesion	3
Task response	4