IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5
(General Training)
IELTS Letter Sample Band 5
5.0
Overall Score
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The letter addresses the main points but lacks formality and has several grammatical errors. The coherence and cohesion are moderate, with some logical flow issues. Vocabulary usage is basic and could be more varied.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 33 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 12 | |
| Lexical resource | 12 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 5 |
Question
You have seen an advertisement in a local newspaper for a part-time job at a bookstore. Write a letter to the bookstore manager.
Explain why you are interested in the job
Describe how your previous experience makes you a suitable candidate
Provide your availability for an interview
#Job Application
#Formal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:140
Paragraphs:8
Word Count Requirement
Formality Match
Readability
Coherence
Cohesion
Vocabulary Usage
Grammar Range
Logical Flow
Incorrect or Missing Opening
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
To
the manager
I've
recently seen the advertisement of
you searching for a part-time worker in your bookstore
. Me myself am a book
lover. I love reading book
in my free time
. When i
saw the advertisement in my newspaper today , I immediately am writing this letter to you.Despite that , I think
i
am really good at communicating with strangers too. I can easily communicate with the customers and also
since i
like reading books
it will be easier to work
in a bookstore
surrounded by books
.this is not my first time
working
in a bookstore
. Few
months ago i
worked
in a bookstorenear
my house but
it has shifted to another town .I promise to
work
hard with all my heart and never dissapoint
you . I will be waiting for your response .yours' faithful
lisa