IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 5.5
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5.5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5.5 (General Training)
5.5
Overall Score
03 Aug 24, 10:50
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Overall Feedback
The letter addresses the main points but lacks specific details and variety in vocabulary. There are some grammatical errors and the structure could be more coherent and cohesive for better readability.
| Overall score | 5.5 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 6.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 4.0 |
| Total Errors | 17 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 4 | |
| Lexical resource | 4 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 5 |
Question
You have visited a hotel for a business trip, and the service you received was exceptional. Write a letter to the hotel manager to express your gratitude.
Describe your experience during the stay
Mention the staff members who were particularly helpful
Explain how their service made your trip pleasant
#Hotel Reservation
#Informal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:99
Paragraphs:3
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To the hotel manager,
I was
very
grateful with
the service of the hotel. The staff members were exceptionally helpful during my stay, they served me very
well. Not to mention that they were very
quick when I called them for my needs. For instance, when I need the cleaning service and called them, they would come immediately. I am very
grateful towards the staff members. They made my business trip easier than what I thought initially. This kind of service lighten
my burden and
I am sure that the other customers felt the same. Thank you.Regards, Hana.