IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 5
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5 (General Training)
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03 Aug 24, 10:56
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Overall Feedback
The letter addresses the main points but lacks coherence and cohesion. There are several grammatical errors and the vocabulary is quite basic. Improving sentence structure and using more varied vocabulary would enhance the overall quality.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 4.0 |
| Total Errors | 24 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 7 | |
| Lexical resource | 6 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 7 |
Question
You have seen an advertisement in a local newspaper for a part-time job at a bookstore. Write a letter to the bookstore manager.
Explain why you are interested in the job
Describe how your previous experience makes you a suitable candidate
Provide your availability for an interview
#Job Application
#Formal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:137
Paragraphs:8
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To The manager,
I would like to show my interest in the
job
opening at our bookstore
which I saw in the local newspaper. I am currently a university student and looking for a part time
job
to cover my daily expenses as well as to save Some money for my future studies.My mother also got fired from her
job
so
I am planning to help my family with some expenses. I am a bookworm and spend most of my time in libraries So
i
think I would be the right candidate for this job
position.I would be
a
able to provide my best experience from some volunteer work at a bookstore
during My vacations.Hoping to hear from you soon.
would
like to thank youin advance to
Consider
my application.Your Sincerely ,
Kirti