IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5
(General Training)
IELTS Letter Sample Band 5
5.0
Overall Score
02 Aug 24, 22:05
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The letter addresses the main points but contains several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Coherence and cohesion are moderate, but the letter could be more logically organized and polished in terms of vocabulary usage.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 4.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 21 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 7 | |
| Lexical resource | 6 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 4 |
Question
You recently moved to a new neighborhood and a neighbor helped you settle in. Write a letter to thank them.
Express your gratitude for their help
Mention how their assistance made the move easier
Invite them over for coffee
#Thank You
#Semi-Formal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:150
Paragraphs:7
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Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
To Sarah,
I am
very
grateful to have you as my new neighbor
. Last two days you helped me move and I owe you one. I am very delight, because of your help I am able to do another thing quicker and easir
.On one hand, you also took your twins children to help us
moving
small things. I could probably spend longer time to move
the stuffs
and unavailable to do other things.In order to thank you, I would like you to invite you for a coffee, together with my family. You have provided action and energy, on the contrary, let us give you a relaxation by drinking together and cheering with my wife and daughter.
We can make this coffee break tomorrow
on
dinner time. I wish to see you tomorrow. You can also take you
children, if
you want to.From your
neighborhood
,Salma
heich
Gukhta