IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5.5

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IELTS Letter Sample Band 5.5

5.5

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15 Jul 24, 08:14

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The letter addresses the main points but has several grammatical errors and lacks variety in sentence structures. The coherence and cohesion are adequate, but the vocabulary could be more varied and precise.

Overall score	5.5
Grammatical range and accuracy	6.0
Lexical resource	6.0
Coherence & cohesion	5.0
Task response	4.0

Question

Your house was damaged due to a storm, and you need to file a claim with your home insurance company.

Explain the extent of the damage

Mention any temporary repairs you have done

Ask about the documentation required for the claim

Inquire about the expected timeline for the claim process

#Insurance Claim

#Formal

Submitted Answer

English:

Words:168

Paragraphs:6

Readability

Coherence

Cohesion

Vocabulary Usage

Grammar Range

Logical Flow

Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete

To : Best Insurance

Dear Sir / Madam,

I am writing this letter to ask for a claim for my house. In nearly last month, several walls in my house were leaking due to massive rain and

thunderstroms

. I think the roof is also not in a good condition as it used to. Because when it rains,

can hear some

sort of a

sound it

makes

proofing that the roof is not so sturdy

anymore

. In my bathroom there are cracked walls as

well

making my bathroom looks untidy and unaesthetic.

I tried to fix it by using sealant liquid all over my walls and roof, but unfortunately this problem still occurs. Please tell me every documentation I need to address this issue, as I am your new joined client and have no experience. Therefore, please also provide me a guide / policy about how the claim processes

works

I can prepare either I have to move first or I can still stay at my house.

Regards,

Mary Brown

Total Errors	18
Grammatical range and accuracy	7
Lexical resource	3
Coherence & cohesion	3
Task response	5