IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 5.5
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5.5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5.5 (General Training)
5.5
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15 Jul 24, 08:14
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Overall Feedback
The letter addresses the main points but has several grammatical errors and lacks variety in sentence structures. The coherence and cohesion are adequate, but the vocabulary could be more varied and precise.
| Overall score | 5.5 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 6.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 4.0 |
| Total Errors | 18 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 7 | |
| Lexical resource | 3 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 5 |
Question
Your house was damaged due to a storm, and you need to file a claim with your home insurance company.
Explain the extent of the damage
Mention any temporary repairs you have done
Ask about the documentation required for the claim
Inquire about the expected timeline for the claim process
#Insurance Claim
#Formal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:168
Paragraphs:6
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To : Best Insurance
Dear Sir / Madam,
I am writing this letter to ask for a claim for my house. In nearly last month, several walls in my house were leaking due to massive rain and
thunderstroms
. I think the roof is also not in a good condition as it used to. Because when it rains, i
can hear some sort of a
sound it makes
proofing that the roof is not so sturdy anymore
. In my bathroom there are cracked walls as well
making my bathroom looks untidy and unaesthetic.I tried to fix it by using sealant liquid all over my walls and roof, but unfortunately this problem still occurs. Please tell me every documentation I need to address this issue, as I am your new joined client and have no experience. Therefore, please also provide me a guide / policy about how the claim processes
works
so
I can prepare either I have to move first or I can still stay at my house.Regards,
Mary Brown