IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 6
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 6 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 6 (General Training)
6.0
Overall Score
02 Aug 24, 19:55
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Overall Feedback
The letter addresses all the bullet points but has several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Coherence and cohesion are generally good, but some transitions could be smoother. Vocabulary is adequate but lacks variety and precision.
| Overall score | 6.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 6.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 10 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 2 | |
| Lexical resource | 3 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 2 |
Question
You found a last-minute travel deal online and decided to book it. Write a letter to your friend describing the deal and your excitement.
Describe the destination and details of the deal
Explain why you decided to book it
Share your excitement and any special plans for the trip
#Travel Booking
#Informal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:153
Paragraphs:6
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Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
To Andika,
Cherrs mate, how are you doing?
Andika
, let us go to Thailand as we planned before. I have booked the tickets and our flight will be on the next three days. Guess what? I got the cheapest online deal for a flight return ticket. It costs for $150 each and includes 25kg baggage, it is far more different when we checked yesterday, $350 each, that was insane.I can't wait for our one-week trip in Bangkok. I've reviewed some places to be visited and some options of department store if we need to bring a hand gift. As we talked, Pattaya and Phuket Beach
can not
be missed.Alright, we will meet one day before our flight, you can now prepare things to bring. It is advisable not to bring
unimportant
as you will just make your luggage heavier. See you soon.Your travel mate,
Citra van Louise