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IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5 (General Training)

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Writing Task

#Meeting Request

#Semi-Formal

You are planning a wedding and need to meet with a wedding planner to discuss the arrangements.

Introduce yourself

Explain the wedding plans

Propose a meeting time

Submitted Answer

Words267|Paragraphs11

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The

wedding

Planner,

My name is Veronica Chinasa Osunwa. And

am the mother of the

bridegroom

who are planning to be wedded next weekend.

The

wedding

plans are as follows; the date of the

wedding

has been chosen to occur on Saturday the 15th of Aprial 2025. The venue of the

wedding

is going to

be the crown in

perth

while

reception will happen afterwards at the

epicurium

part of the crown at approximately 5pm.

The

bride

and groom will be taking photos with both the family of the

bride

and

bride

groom

prior to

commencing the reception in front of the crown entrance. The attire is a formal white with red. The

foot wear

is any black with pointed toes.

The

bride

and the

bridegroom

choose the song written by Veronica called, '

goodnews

', which is

schedulled

to be

sang

at the inception of the ceremony.

The time l

proposing is either from 3pm to 4pm, photo by the

bride

and

bridegroom

This will be followed by dancing into the hall by the bridal train from 410pm to 4.30pm.

The next agenda will be

ushering

in of the bridal and groom train as they dance and jubilate one by one from 435pm to 510pm.

The

bride

and

bridegroom

will be

given

the opportunity to make their way into the hall in a slow and steady moves mixed with dancing into the hall from 510pm to 610pm.

Introduction of all the

charmen

chairlady

and guests of honour will take place from 5pm to 615pm,

The rest of the programmed is estimated to be done

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Total Errors	30
Grammatical range and accuracy	5
Lexical resource	16
Coherence & cohesion	3
Task response	5