IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5
(General Training)
IELTS Letter Sample Band 5
5.0
Overall Score
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The letter addresses all the bullet points but contains numerous grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. The coherence and cohesion are acceptable, but the vocabulary usage is limited and repetitive. The formality is mostly appropriate but could be improved.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 4.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 23 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 9 | |
| Lexical resource | 7 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 1 |
Question
You missed an important meeting with your friend to discuss a project. Write an apology letter to your friend.
Explain why you missed the meeting
Apologize for any inconvenience
Arrange a new meeting time
#Friend Apology
#Informal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:159
Paragraphs:1
Paragraph Count Requirement
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Coherence
Cohesion
Vocabulary Usage
Grammar Range
Logical Flow
The
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I am writing this leeter
yo you is
I am very sorry that I missed an important meeting with you to discuss a project. Because I have some huge things must to
do in this morning. My grandpa was fall
down from the chair this moring
so that I have
to send he go
to the hospital as soon as possible. Because he is old, a sudden fall may cause irreversible consequence, so I was so anxious and worried that I forgot to explain the situation to you, so that
you would not wait for me. I know this behavior
is wrong and
I didn't tell you when this thing happened. I know this siuation
really wastes your time, I am deely
sorry
. If you can understand my difficulties, I hope our meeting can be moved to any day next week. You decide the time and I will definitely obey. I am sorry to you again.