IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 5
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5 (General Training)
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12 Nov 24, 09:38
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Overall Feedback
The letter addresses the task but contains numerous grammatical errors and lacks coherence. Vocabulary is basic, and the structure could be improved for better clarity and formality.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 4.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 25 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 11 | |
| Lexical resource | 6 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 4 |
Question
You recently purchased a laptop online, but it is not functioning correctly. Write a letter to the customer service department of the online store.
Describe the problems with the laptop.
Explain how these issues are affecting you.
State what you would like the store to do to resolve the problem.
#Complaint Letter
#Formal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:179
Paragraphs:7
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Incorrect or Missing Opening
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Respected sir
I am writing this letter with some issues in the
laptop
that I recently bought from the online store yesterday. When I first use the
laptop
then
it was working fully with good speed and the system was also good, but as soon as I opened the
laptop
in the later hours of the day the there was so sound in it and the system was crashing too.
I think there is some virus in it
I am working in a company and requires the
laptop
to complete my office work. But now I am facing these issue and
it is very diificult
for me do
the assigned task to me. Moreover
in the tomorrow
morning I have to schedule a
urgent metting
with my friends boss, but it makes me diificult
to do all the essential tasksI would like to have a technician send to my home to clear the issue or If
its
possible to have a refund for it
I would really
appriciate
if a quick action can be taken.Yours sincerely
Tavleen