IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 5.5
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5.5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5.5 (General Training)
5.5
Overall Score
25 Sept 24, 19:50
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Overall Feedback
The letter addresses the main points but contains several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. The coherence and cohesion are acceptable, but the vocabulary and grammar range need improvement for a higher band score.
| Overall score | 5.5 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 28 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 7 | |
| Lexical resource | 12 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 4 |
Question
You are applying for a teaching position at a local school. Write a letter to the principal.
Explain your interest in the position
Highlight your teaching experience and qualifications
Discuss your teaching philosophy
Request an interview at a convenient time
#Job Application
#Formal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:191
Paragraphs:11
Formality Match
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Coherence
Cohesion
Vocabulary Usage
Grammar Range
Logical Flow
Incorrect or Missing Opening
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Mr. Gunasekare,
The Principle,
Polymath Collage.
Dear Sir,
I am writing to express my interest regarding the advertisement published in your school website for the post of Music Teacher.
The main reason why I am keen about this vacancy is, I am a responsible and compassionate individual, who likes to work with young children those who are
intrested
about music. Further, As a teacher, I am holding 6 years of experience in the same field and have completed my Bhathkandeh
Visharadha
exams also
.Accordingly to accelerate the
childrens
intrest
towards music and attract them I use few technics such as let children
to decide
the instruments that they need to play, to sing songs what the like , introduce new ways of playing instruments, be close to
the each
of them and trying to understand their learning patterns, etc.
However, above, I have
summerized
my qualification and experience and few of the technics that I am familier
with. Hereby, I would like to kindly request for a possible time slot from your busy calender
to discuss about the
oppertunity
in detail.Seeking for your favourable
responce
in this regards
.Thank you
Binuki.