IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 7

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IELTS Letter Sample Band 7

7.0
Overall Score
14 Jul 24, 10:20
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The letter is well-structured and covers all the required points, but there are minor grammatical errors and some awkward phrasing. Vocabulary usage is appropriate but could be more varied to enhance the formality and clarity of the letter.

Overall score7.0
Grammatical range and accuracy7.0
Lexical resource7.0
Coherence & cohesion8.0
Task response5.0
Total Errors15
Grammatical range and accuracy5
Lexical resource5
Coherence & cohesion3
Task response2
Question
You are resigning from your job because you have decided to join a non-profit organization. Write a formal resignation letter.
Announce your resignation
Mention your decision to join a non-profit organization
Indicate your last working day
Thank your employer for the experience and support
#Resignation Letter
#Formal
Submitted Answer
English:UK English
Words:177
Paragraphs:8
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Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
July 14, 2024
Dear sir or madam,
I am writing this to inform you of my decision to resign from this company. I am grateful to have spent my time here
and
I hope that you will respect my choice to move onto a new path
of
my life.
After some soul-searching, I have realized my hidden passion for animal and environment preservation. With some digging through the internet, I found
an amazing
non-profit organization that aids in animal rescue and plastic waste reduction. Fortunately, my application was accepted and will be working as their new promotion manager.
I would also like to inform you that I
intend to officially leave the office
by next
Wednesday
as I would like to
completely finish
the project that I have been managing for this month’s quota.
Once again, thank you for the opportunity at this company and I hope for your understanding. If you have any questions or concerns pertaining to my resignation
please
let me know. Have a smooth day today.
KInd regards,
John Doe