IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5
(General Training)
IELTS Letter Sample Band 5
5.0
Overall Score
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The response covers the main points but lacks coherence and cohesion. Grammar and vocabulary usage are basic with several errors. The letter lacks a proper beginning and signature, affecting formality and readability.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 4.0 |
| Total Errors | 18 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 3 | |
| Lexical resource | 4 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 6 |
Question
You attended a festival parade and want to share the experience with a friend. Write to them.
Describe the festival parade
Explain what you enjoyed most
Send your festival greetings
Invite them to attend next time
#Festival Greetings
#Informal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:91
Paragraphs:1
Word Count Requirement
Paragraph Count Requirement
Formality Match
Readability
Coherence
Cohesion
Vocabulary Usage
Grammar Range
Logical Flow
Incorrect or Missing Opening
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
I've always been fascinated with festival parades. I always look forward to
watching
them. It was indeed still fascinating to watch
. Colorful
floats amused me with such beautiful flowers. I enjoyed seeing beautiful parades of queens dressed in beautifully made gowns. I wish I could be one of them soon. Happy fiesta
Mary of Fatima. I would you to come and watch
the parade with me, I assure you, you will love it.
You can bring with you your family, For sure
they would love to. Let go and watch
.