IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 6
(General Training)
IELTS Letter Sample Band 6
6.0
Overall Score
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Overall Feedback
The letter addresses the task but lacks a formal beginning and has some grammatical errors. Coherence and cohesion are adequate, but the logical flow could be improved. Vocabulary usage is appropriate but not varied enough.
| Overall score | 6.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 6.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 18 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 6 | |
| Lexical resource | 4 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 5 |
Question
The lease for your rented office space is expiring soon, and you want to extend it. Write to the landlord.
State your desire to extend the lease
Provide reasons for wanting the extension
Suggest a new lease term
#Rental Extension
#Formal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:140
Paragraphs:5
Word Count Requirement
Formality Match
Readability
Coherence
Cohesion
Vocabulary Usage
Grammar Range
Logical Flow
Incorrect or Missing Opening
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
I hope this letter finds you well, I want to express my intention to extend the lease and continue working in the office
space
. The office has an ample space
and people are able to move around comfortably.Aside from good
space
and modern design, the location of the office is perfect for our employees because of the restaurants, wellness centres nearby and very accessible with
public transport.We fell
inlove
with the place and
we share a lot of memories as a team. Also
the space
offers flexibility to move around works spaces
and desks as our team grows.I am hoping to extend our lease for 5 more years,
Let me know
if you need additional information or supporting documents to proceed with the agreement. I am looking forward for
you
swift response.Thank you and Kind Regards,