IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 7.5
(General Training)
IELTS Letter Sample Band 7.5
7.5
Overall Score
15 Jul 24, 07:58
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Overall Feedback
The letter is well-structured and covers all the required points, but there are minor grammatical errors and some awkward phrasing. The vocabulary is appropriate but could be more varied to enhance the formality and clarity of the letter.
| Overall score | 7.5 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 7.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 7.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 8.0 | |
| Task response | 7.0 |
| Total Errors | 15 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 4 | |
| Lexical resource | 6 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 2 |
Question
You have decided to cancel your annual membership at a local theater. Write a letter to the theater membership coordinator.
Explain the purpose of your letter
Describe the reason for your decision
Request a confirmation of the cancellation
#Membership Cancellation
#Formal
Submitted Answer
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Words:118
Paragraphs:6
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I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing to inform you that I have decided to cancel my annual
membership
at local
theater
. My membership
details are as follows:Name: Princess Luise C.
Ansing
Membership
type: Annual Membership
The reason
of
my cancellation is because
I have already accepted by the national theater
membership
and
it would be difficult for me to join two groups with similar membership
. I am grateful for your exceedingly high performance and collaboration throughout my application.I kindly request that my
membership
be cancelled effective immediately. Please confirm receipt of this request and provide necessary confirmation or documentation of the cancellation process.Thank you for your prompt attention to this matter.