IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 6
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 6 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 6 (General Training)
6.0
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05 Feb 25, 18:09
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Overall Feedback
The letter adequately addresses the task but lacks detail in the booking details and accommodation/flight information. Grammar is mostly accurate, but the range could be improved. Vocabulary is appropriate but not varied. Coherence and cohesion are satisfactory, though the logical flow could be enhanced.
| Overall score | 6.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 7.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 13 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 2 | |
| Lexical resource | 3 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 4 |
Writing Task
#Travel Plans
#Semi-Formal
You had planned a vacation to a tropical island, but due to unforeseen circumstances, you need to cancel your trip. Write a letter to the travel agency explaining your situation.
Explain why you need to cancel your trip
Provide your booking details
Ask about the refund process
Submitted Answer
Words132|Paragraphs8
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I hope this email finds you well. Unfortunately, due to unforeseen circumstances, I am unable to proceed with my planned
vacation
to [Tropical Island Destination] and must cancel my trip. I sincerely regret this change of plans and appreciate your assistance in processing the cancellation.Here are my booking details:
Booking Reference Number2131
Traveler Name:young
Trip Dates: 15-05-2025 – 17-02-2025
Accommodation/Flight Details:
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I would like to inquire about the refund process and any cancellation fees that may apply. Please let me know the next steps required to complete the cancellation and receive any applicable refund. If there are alternative options, such as rescheduling or credit for future travel, I would appreciate the details.
Thank you for your time and assistance. I look forward to your prompt response.