IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 7
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 7 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 7 (General Training)
7.0
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Overall Feedback
The letter is well-structured and covers the main points effectively, but it lacks a formal beginning and signature. The grammar is mostly accurate with a good range, and the vocabulary is appropriate but could be more varied. Coherence and cohesion are good, but the logical flow could be improved slightly.
| Overall score | 7.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 8.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 7.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 7.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 14 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 1 | |
| Lexical resource | 5 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 4 |
Question
A colleague who is involved in community service is applying for an award and has asked you to write a recommendation letter.
Describe your colleague's community service activities
Highlight their impact on the community
Explain why they deserve the award
#Recommendation Letter
#Formal
Submitted Answer
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Words:155
Paragraphs:3
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I am
writing to strongly recommend my colleague
, Sarah Thompson, for the Community Service Excellence Award. Over the past three years, I have had the pleasure of working closely with Sarah at Westfield Community Center, and I have been continuously impressed by her dedication to serving the community.Sarah’s primary involvement has been through her leadership of the “Bright Futures Tutoring Program,” which she founded in 2021. This program provides free academic tutoring and mentorship to children from underprivileged families in the Westfield area. Every week, Sarah dedicates her evenings to tutoring students in
math
, science, and English, ensuring they not only excel academically but also build
confidence in their abilities. The program has grown significantly under her guidance, now serving over 50 children on a regular basis
. Many parents have expressed their gratitude for the remarkable improvement in their children’s grades and self-esteem.Thank you for considering her for this recognition.