IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5
(General Training)
IELTS Letter Sample Band 5
5.0
Overall Score
29 Jul 24, 19:40
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Overall Feedback
The letter addresses the main points but contains several grammatical errors and lacks coherence. Vocabulary is basic and repetitive, and the letter could be more organized and formal in tone.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 23 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 6 | |
| Lexical resource | 7 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 5 |
Question
You have won a contest and the prize is a vacation trip. Write a letter to your employer requesting leave.
Explain how you won the contest
Provide the dates you will be away
Offer to complete urgent tasks before you leave
#Vacation Request
#Semi-Formal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:108
Paragraphs:6
Word Count Requirement
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Cohesion
Vocabulary Usage
Grammar Range
Logical Flow
Incorrect or Missing Opening
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Hope this letter find you well and in good health.
I am
writting
this letter to request me leave for few
days. As I have won a contest yesterday when I was at the mall shopping with my friends and the prize is a vacation
trip to Paris.I would like to take office leave from 12-Aug to 16-Aug as it is a
4 day
trip
and
I am very excited to go there,
befor
leaving I have only one pending task which I will complete
till
10-Aug so that no pending tasks are left
and
I can enjoy my
vacation
.
Thankyou
Your
sciencerly
Linda