IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 5
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5 (General Training)
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03 Aug 24, 13:02
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Overall Feedback
The letter addresses the main points but lacks coherence and cohesion. Grammar and vocabulary usage need improvement, and the formality is not consistent with the expected semi-formal tone.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 4.0 |
| Total Errors | 21 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 7 | |
| Lexical resource | 4 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 6 |
Question
You want to apply for a scholarship to fund your studies. Write a letter to the scholarship committee.
Introduce yourself and your academic achievements
Explain why you need the scholarship
Describe how the scholarship will help you achieve your goals
#Study Plan
#Semi-Formal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:156
Paragraphs:3
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Hi, my name is Nicole Tjandra
I'm
from Indonesia. I am a high school student, pursuing my degree at Monash University. I will be starting my BIM in Kanaan Cianjur. I came across this scholarship program through the platforms and got it from my school, I am a great fit for this program.During my high school academic year, I maintained excellent academic with a GPA of 9.5 while taking on various internships and part-time jobs at Starbucks. These experiences opened my eyes to the world of industry and made me grow a dream to pursue this as a career in the future
Accordingly, I need this scholarship because I want to help my parents, for this reason, my parents
won't
be paying my university and
it can save a lot of money for the future. Also
i
hope when i
get this scolarship
i
can do my best in my passion