IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 6
(General Training)
IELTS Letter Sample Band 6
6.0
Overall Score
08 Aug 24, 06:45
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The letter covers all the required points but lacks coherence and cohesion. There are several grammatical errors and the vocabulary is somewhat limited. The formality is not consistent with a semi-formal tone.
| Overall score | 6.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 6.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 14 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 4 | |
| Lexical resource | 2 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 4 |
Question
You are hosting a garden party to celebrate the beginning of spring. Write a letter to a friend inviting them to the party.
Explain the reason for the garden party
Provide details about the date, time, and location
Mention any special activities or themes
#Invitation Letter
#Semi-Formal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:108
Paragraphs:6
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Hi everyone
, because
we have just start the beginning of spring season. So this time, I would like to invite you all to my garden party celebration.Date: Saturday, 10 August 2024
Time: 18.30 P.M
Location: Baskville, Anne Street 17A (My House)
I hope all of you guys join me in this
fun
exciting party, because
we will use an eco-friendly dresscode
to celebrate this spring season. We will have a pool party, ice breaking, spooky sleepover, and also hide-and-seek. So what are you guys waiting for, I will wait for all of you to come and join me. See you soon.Bye.