IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 6
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 6 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 6 (General Training)
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Overall Feedback
The letter addresses all the tasks but contains several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. While the ideas are generally clear, the coherence and cohesion could be improved with better transitions and structure.
| Overall score | 6.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 6.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 16 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 4 | |
| Lexical resource | 6 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 3 |
Question
You have registered for a class but need to withdraw due to unforeseen circumstances. Write a letter to the institution.
Explain the class you registered for.
Describe the reason for withdrawal.
Ask about the refund policy.
#Class Registration
#Semi-Formal
Submitted Answer
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Paragraphs:6
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Hi Sir/Madam,
I hope this letter finds you well. The French session, I registered for is going to start next week. Actually, I needed to learn this language necessarily as I am moving to Qubeac city in January. I also wanted to enhance my multi-language
skills, therefore,
I enrolled in your session.But, I recently got a job offer letter from the city I was thinking to move. They took my interview last day, and today I signed the joining letter because it is my dream job in IT sector. Consequently, I have to join my position as soon as possible. Unfortunately, I
can not
be enrolled in french
classes anymore
. There is no doubt, your institute is best
in teaching skills and remain always
my favourite.I request you to let me know the procedure of
unsubscibing
from the classes and refund. However, I also want you to let me provide with the information if there will be any online session in the future. I will definetely
join them.Your trustworthy
Gurdeep Kaur