IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 7
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 7 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 7 (General Training)
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Overall Feedback
The letter effectively addresses the task with clear explanations and requests, but could benefit from more varied sentence structures and vocabulary. While the coherence and cohesion are generally good, the letter could be improved by enhancing the logical flow and using more linking words.
| Overall score | 7.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 6.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 7.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 7.0 | |
| Task response | 7.0 |
| Total Errors | 15 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 6 | |
| Lexical resource | 4 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 1 |
Question
You are planning a holiday trip and need some travel gear from your friend. Write a letter to your friend.
Explain your holiday destination and plans.
Ask to borrow specific travel gear.
Mention how long you will need the items.
#Holiday Plans
#Informal
Submitted Answer
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Words:161
Paragraphs:5
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Hi Sarah,
How was your weekend? I am writing to ask if you mind me borrowing your
camera
for my next holiday trip to Banff.My family and I plan to go to Banff next
week
and
we are going to spend one week
there to take
some photos and unwind from the whole year of busy work. We plan to visit five lakes in total and
then we will spend one night at the mountain to take
a deep breath of fresh air and take
photos of shining stars at midnight. Unfortunately, my camera
just broke yesterday, and the retail department told me it would take
at least one week
to fix it. I wonder if you could
borrow
me your
camera
for a
week
so
I can catch all the meaningful moments during my holiday trip
and
also I will provide my digital cards so you do not need to worry about the storage of your
camera
.
Regards,
Zhenyue