IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 5
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5 (General Training)
5.0
Overall Score
26 Jul 24, 22:49
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Overall Feedback
The letter addresses the main points but lacks formality and has several grammatical errors. The coherence and cohesion are average, with some sentences not flowing smoothly. Vocabulary usage is basic and could be improved for better clarity and formality.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 4.0 |
| Total Errors | 16 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 1 | |
| Lexical resource | 3 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 8 |
Question
You are planning a road trip and need to book a hotel room with parking facilities. Write a letter to the hotel manager to inquire about parking options.
Introduce yourself and your travel plans
Specify the dates of your stay
Ask about available parking facilities
Inquire about any additional charges for parking
#Hotel Reservation
#Informal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:91
Paragraphs:6
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Hi Pat,
My name is Hammed, I am currently in Kitchener, I will be coming to Toronto on the 24th of July for a conference. I need a room in your hotel for 5 days, my budget is between $800 per night. I
wil
prefer a room with a good view, cross ventilation, and a private bathroom.Also, do you have available parking face in your hotel, if yes,
whats
the cost per night, is this the cost included in your charges?I await your swift response.
Yours Faithfully,
Hammed Omitogun