IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5.5
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IELTS Letter Sample Band 5.5
5.5
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The letter addresses all the bullet points but contains several grammatical errors and informal expressions. The coherence and cohesion are adequate, but the vocabulary could be more varied and formal to match the semi-formal tone expected.
| Overall score | 5.5 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 20 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 10 | |
| Lexical resource | 2 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 4 |
Question
You are getting married soon and wish to invite your former teacher from university. Write a letter to your teacher.
Give details about the wedding date and place
Explain the significance of their presence
Invite them to the celebrations
#Wedding Invitation
#Informal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:187
Paragraphs:4
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Incorrect or Missing Opening
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Hi, Mr. Luke. Do you still remember me? I'm Frans, your 2018
students
in
Toronto University. I hope you have a good day and enjoy your life. I have so many new experiences in my life, since I'm graduated. Sometimes, I miss my old time, when I'm on
collage, haha. But, yeah, life must go on. One of the things from my experiences, makes me write this letter for you. I'm gonna married soon, Mr. Luke. If you wonder who is she, it's Maria Gerald, your Physics student on
2020.I want to invite you
on
my wedding
. The wedding
will be on
Herbert Restaurant on 17th November around 7 PM. I will send my digital invitation wedding
as soon as possible to your email, just for formality.The
wedding
will be organized with +1, so you can come with your wife. I hope you can come to my wedding
event, because
your presence will be so meaningful to me.Thank you so much, Mr. Luke. It's a gratitude
for
me if you can participate on
my wedding
. God bless you.