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IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5.5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5.5 (General Training)

5.5
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25 Mar 25, 09:46
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Overall Feedback

The letter addresses all tasks but lacks a semi-formal tone, affecting coherence and cohesion. Grammar errors and limited vocabulary usage reduce clarity and impact. Improving sentence structure and vocabulary variety would enhance the response.
Overall score5.5
Grammatical range and accuracy5.0
Lexical resource6.0
Coherence & cohesion6.0
Task response5.0
Total Errors16
Grammatical range and accuracy5
Lexical resource3
Coherence & cohesion4
Task response4

Writing Task

#Festival Greetings
#Informal
You want to send festival greetings to a friend who recently moved to another city. Write a letter to them.
Send your festival greetings
Ask about their new life in the city
Share how you celebrated the festival
Invite them to visit soon

Submitted Answer

Words99|Paragraphs6
English:UK English
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Hi Morgan,
Happy New Year! How
is
your studies? And how is life in the new city? I have heard you made lots of good friends. I am relieved to hear that.
Anyway, we spent the holiday in my grandparent's house like how we always do. There
were
enough
foods
to
lasts
us until midnight. After dinner, we sang songs with my cousins, uncles, and aunts, and we watched the fireworks. Everyone was in awe.
Would you like to celebrate with us next new year? You will
defnitely
love it!
I hope to hear from you soon
!
Xyna

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