IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5

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IELTS Letter Sample Band 5

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The letter addresses the main points but contains several grammatical errors and lacks variety in sentence structures. The coherence and cohesion are acceptable but could be improved with better organization and transitions.

Overall score5.0
Grammatical range and accuracy5.0
Lexical resource5.0
Coherence & cohesion5.0
Task response5.0
Total Errors34
Grammatical range and accuracy16
Lexical resource9
Coherence & cohesion4
Task response5
Question
You failed to return a borrowed item to your friend on time. Write an apology letter to your friend.
Explain why you didn't return the item on time.
Apologize for the delay.
Promise to return it as soon as possible.
#Apology Letter
#Informal
Submitted Answer
English:UK English
Words:147
Paragraphs:9
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Hi Mike,
I hope you are doing well.
I am writing a letter
to
apology that
i
failed to
return
your
bike
which you
lend
me last week from your
bike
store.
It went on a
bike
ride with friends right after taking the
bike
from you
and
it was a fun riding this
bike
.
Due to the change in plan
of
my return
in
the town
i
failed to
return
the
bike
on time. But rest assured that
i
will be coming back
in
town on this coming
monday
with your
bike
and
i
will
return
it the same day of my
arrival
which is
monday
.
once again
i
would like to sincerely apologize for the delay in
returnuing
the
bike
and assure you that
i
will
return
it on
monday
effectively.
Thank you for your understanding
in this regards
and
i
appreciate it.
Sincerely
Nav