IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 5
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5 (General Training)
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Overall Feedback
The letter addresses the main points but contains several grammatical errors and lacks variety in sentence structures. The coherence and cohesion are acceptable but could be improved with better organization and transitions.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 34 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 16 | |
| Lexical resource | 9 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 5 |
Question
You failed to return a borrowed item to your friend on time. Write an apology letter to your friend.
Explain why you didn't return the item on time.
Apologize for the delay.
Promise to return it as soon as possible.
#Apology Letter
#Informal
Submitted Answer
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Words:147
Paragraphs:9
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Hi Mike,
I hope you are doing well.
I am writing a letter
to
apology that i
failed to return
your bike
which you lend
me last week from your bike
store.It went on a
bike
ride with friends right after taking the bike
from you and
it was a fun riding this bike
.Due to the change in plan
of
my return in
the town i
failed to return
the bike
on time. But rest assured that i
will be coming back in
town on this coming monday
with your bike
and i
will return
it the same day of my arrival
which is monday
.once again
i
would like to sincerely apologize for the delay in returnuing
the bike
and assure you that i
will return
it on monday
effectively.Thank you for your understanding
in this regards
and i
appreciate it.Sincerely
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