IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 5
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5 (General Training)
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11 Nov 24, 08:57
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Overall Feedback
The letter addresses the main issues but lacks a formal structure and contains grammatical errors. Improved coherence and a more varied vocabulary would enhance clarity and effectiveness.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 29 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 14 | |
| Lexical resource | 7 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 4 |
Question
You recently had a meal delivered to your home and found it unsatisfactory. Write a letter to the food delivery service.
Describe the issues with your order
Explain how it affected your meal experience
Request a solution or compensation
#Service Feedback
#Semi-Formal
Submitted Answer
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Words:166
Paragraphs:3
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Hi I have a problem with my food, the part of the chicken I ordered
was
thigh, but the one I receive
is
breast. I have a problem with my teeth, that's
why
could not eat chicken's breast because it's
hard and solid. I prefer thigh
part of the chicken because it's
easy to consume.The oil from the
chili
sauce is also scattered to the packaging so
now everything is covered under
oil. The rice looked good and the vegetables on the side is also looked fresh. Thank you for thatKnowing I
haven't
touched the meal I received, I would like to get a substitute meal to solve this problem. If you
able to take this complaint seriously, I will give you permission to call me on my number to act on this
furthermore. I hope I can get the substitute meal in no time, because
I'm
hungry and would like to eat immediately. Thank you
once again