IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 5
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5 (General Training)
5.0
Overall Score
08 Nov 24, 08:05
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Overall Feedback
The letter addresses all tasks but lacks coherence and has several grammatical errors. Vocabulary is basic and there are issues with formality and structure, affecting overall readability.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 4.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 31 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 12 | |
| Lexical resource | 12 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 3 |
Question
You attended a friend's birthday party and had a great time. Write a letter to thank them.
Thank your friend for inviting you
Mention something specific you enjoyed at the party
Extend an invitation to them for your birthday
#Thank You
#Semi-Formal
Submitted Answer
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Paragraphs:7
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Hi,
I Think this letter finds you
well
,Thank you very much for the wonderful party and i really
facinated
your invitation. i
enjoyed up to the max. It was organised
very well
and food were amazing
. As a result i
was find
my close old friends it
was pleasure
to talk and enjoy with them.As a
result
we shared many things also spent quality time with them. As you know already, Nimmi was in bad condition because of her illness and
also she faced many financial difficulties.Hence
im
planning to take care of her medical expences
. Our company also doing many donations in regards to
this type of families therefore
it will be great opportunity to assist her as well
as on behalf of all our gang.I would like to invite you
my
birthday pary
on next month. I will invite all our friends as well
. This came to mind after your birthday party because i
was so impressed with it..
I hope you all are coming on that day.
it
will be memerable
day for me.Thank you.