IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 5
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5 (General Training)
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01 Aug 24, 23:24
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Overall Feedback
The letter addresses all the bullet points but lacks coherence and cohesion. There are several grammatical errors and the vocabulary is quite basic. The formality is not fully appropriate for a semi-formal letter.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 25 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 4 | |
| Lexical resource | 13 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 5 |
Question
You have moved to a new house and want to inform your relative.
Describe the new house and its features
Explain why you moved to this new place
Invite your relative to visit
#New Home Notice
#Informal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:100
Paragraphs:5
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Incorrect or Missing Opening
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Hi Edison
I'm very happy to announce, that
im
moving to a new location, im
going to Liverpool street.The new house is
amazing
, brand new, the style is minimalistic. The apartment
has two rooms, one badthroom
and a full equiped
kitchen.Im moving because we will
became
a bigger family and
we need more space, the rent is monthly: around 1500 punds
. We will need some help with the moving. I'm gonna
prepare the amazing
paella, aslo
Ernesta can prepare some amazing
cocktails, so you are welcome to going us. Some friends are coming as well.Daniel