IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5.5
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IELTS Letter Sample Band 5.5
5.5
Overall Score
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The letter addresses the main tasks but contains several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Coherence and cohesion are generally maintained, but the letter could be more logically organized. Vocabulary is adequate but lacks variety and precision.
| Overall score | 5.5 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 28 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 15 | |
| Lexical resource | 8 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 2 |
Question
You are organizing a surprise trip for your sibling. Write a letter to your sibling's best friend to ask for help.
Explain the reason for the trip.
Ask for assistance in planning the activities.
Request information about any preferences your sibling might have.
#Travel Plans
#Informal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:220
Paragraphs:7
Readability
Coherence
Cohesion
Vocabulary Usage
Grammar Range
Logical Flow
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Hi Ayush,
Hope you are doing well! I am writing this letter in regard
with
arranging a trip
for you best
friend means my brother Himanshu. I am planning this trip
for his 25th birthday. As he is returning from abroad, I want to make this surprise trip
as amazing
as it can. And I would need your little help in it.We are planning this family
trip
to North India. Could you help with good
cities to cover over there.
As you already been there and as his best
friend I am sure your preferences matches. So he would appreciate all the fun activities you enjoyed over there. Also please
let me know if he likes something else as well. As you are
his roomate
from
past
2 years
I am sure you know more about it.Can you help me with
iternerary
so that this trip
is smooth.
Please send me all the deatils
on whatsapp
.Moreover
I would like you to bring him to airport
on the pretext of something. Me with my family would be there already. so
that we can surprise him.As a Sister
looking
at my younger brother happy is
best
thing. Hope you get me and assist me in this fun trip
. waiting
to hear from you soon.Thanks and Regards,
Yukta