IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 6
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 6 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 6 (General Training)
6.0
Overall Score
09 Sept 24, 09:26
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Overall Feedback
The letter addresses all the bullet points but contains several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. The coherence and cohesion are generally good, but the vocabulary usage could be more varied and precise.
| Overall score | 6.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 7.0 |
| Total Errors | 18 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 4 | |
| Lexical resource | 10 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 1 |
Question
You borrowed a book from your friend and found it very helpful. Write a letter to thank your friend.
Thank them for lending you the book
Explain how the book was helpful
Mention how it has impacted you
#Thank You
#Informal
Submitted Answer
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Words:167
Paragraphs:6
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Hi Alex,
Hope this letter find you well. I am
really
grateful that you lend your book on Behaviour of Organizations. Which has many important facts on how the organizations oprates
. Specially on how to implement policies and job descriptions.The book is specially for human resources students. And it has
lot of
new
theories and information. Seems this is the new
edition of the author, It had all the new
findings on motivation and performance. Further, he has written about the internal auditing also
.However, the book came handy for my recent exams on strategies of implementing
new
policies. I have got a question on the same. Not only that, recently I have appointed as the new
HR aduditor
for the customer sevice
section and I have got many new
ideas on auditing and analysing reports. Because of you, I managed to apply one of the motivational theories for our new
prformance
appraisal also
. Thanking you once again for the
kindness and suppot
.Best regards
Binuki