IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 5
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5 (General Training)
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Overall Feedback
The letter covers the main points but lacks a semi-formal tone and contains several grammatical errors. The coherence and cohesion could be improved with better organization and transitions, and the vocabulary is somewhat limited and informal.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 19 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5 | |
| Lexical resource | 6 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 4 |
Question
You are planning a baby shower for your cousin and want to invite a family friend. Write a letter to the family friend.
Mention the date and venue of the baby shower
Describe the theme of the event
Request them to RSVP by a certain date
#Baby Shower Invitation
#Informal
Submitted Answer
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Words:164
Paragraphs:6
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Hi, Agapito!
I wanna talk with you about an event I would like to invite you to.
My uncle and aunt are having a baby
on
5 months
and
I'd like you to go to the baby shower because they told me that I can bring just one friend, and I chose you, you're the chosen one, right?
Anyways
, the event will be this saturday
at 2:00pm at
the communall
room of the Santa Fe apartments.The event will have games, food, music, beer, and there
is going to
be a section about guessing the baby's genre. So, if it's blue, it will be a male, however, if it's pink, surely will be a girl, obviusly
.Finally, I'm going to send them your RSVP to my uncle and to my aunt and also to my parents, alright? Well, if you are available that day, just
advice
me, please.Okay, have a nice afternoon, see you later!
Felipe