IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 5

IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5 (General Training)

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09 Apr 25, 08:38
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Overall Feedback

The letter lacks a semi-formal tone and contains several grammatical errors, affecting clarity. While it addresses the tasks, the ideas are not well-organized, and vocabulary usage is limited, impacting coherence and task achievement.
Overall score5.0
Grammatical range and accuracy4.0
Lexical resource5.0
Coherence & cohesion5.0
Task response5.0
Total Errors18
Grammatical range and accuracy6
Lexical resource2
Coherence & cohesion4
Task response5

Writing Task

#Graduation Congratulations
#Informal
Your friend has graduated with a degree in business administration. Write a letter to congratulate them.
Express your heartfelt congratulations.
Talk about their dedication and perseverance.
Discuss their career prospects.

Submitted Answer

Words100|Paragraphs3
English:US English
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Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Hey my friend,
i
would to congratulate you for the graduation of your degree in business administration, as your friend that really long time be with you and beside you,
i
really appreciated your hard work and dedication to finish your degree.
So what is your plan for the next career?
i
think it will be great if you
works
in
multi
level company, maybe apply as manager or CEO of the big company, so you will be able to get a lot of money.
I think that is my letter of gratitude
for
you, once again congratulation my friend.

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