IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 6
(General Training)
IELTS Letter Sample Band 6
6.0
Overall Score
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The letter addresses the main tasks but lacks detail and variety in vocabulary. There are some grammatical errors and the structure could be more cohesive. Improving sentence variety and coherence would enhance the overall quality.
| Overall score | 6.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 6.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 12 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 4 | |
| Lexical resource | 1 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 3 |
Question
You are planning a holiday abroad and need some advice. Write a letter to a friend who has been to that country.
Describe your travel plans.
Ask for recommendations on places to visit.
Inquire about any travel tips.
#Travel Plans
#Informal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:112
Paragraphs:6
Word Count Requirement
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Readability
Coherence
Cohesion
Vocabulary Usage
Grammar Range
Logical Flow
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Hey Shiya,
I am planning my trip to Canada. I would be there from Sep 10th to Oct 5th and would be staying at a hotel for
few
days in Vancouver and after that would fly to Toronto to see some of my friends and family.I am looking for some advice from you about some fun activities or places to visit, and if there are some travel tips
i
should know before leaving, i
would really appreciate that.I can plan some time to spend at your place as well if you would be managing some time off from your job. Will be looking forward to hearing from you.
Regards,
Kirti