IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5.5

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IELTS Letter Sample Band 5.5

5.5
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05 Aug 24, 19:26
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The letter addresses the main tasks but lacks some detail and has several grammatical errors. The coherence and cohesion are adequate, but the vocabulary and grammar range could be improved for a higher score.

Overall score5.5
Grammatical range and accuracy5.0
Lexical resource6.0
Coherence & cohesion6.0
Task response5.0
Total Errors16
Grammatical range and accuracy6
Lexical resource3
Coherence & cohesion4
Task response3
Question
You are planning a holiday abroad and need some advice. Write a letter to a friend who has been to that country.
Describe your travel plans.
Ask for recommendations on places to visit.
Inquire about any travel tips.
#Travel Plans
#Informal
Submitted Answer
English:UK English
Words:112
Paragraphs:6
Word Count Requirement
Linking Devices
Readability
Coherence
Cohesion
Vocabulary Usage
Grammar Range
Logical Flow
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Hey Shiya,
I am planning my trip to Canada. I would be there from
sep
10th to Oct 5th and would be staying at a hotel for few days in Vancouver and after that would fly to Toronto to see some of my friends and family.
I am looking for some advice from you
for
some fun activities or places to visit, and if there are some travel tips
i
should know before
leaving
i
would really
appriciate
that.
I can plan some time to spend at your place as well if you would be managing some time off from your job. Will be looking forward
to hear
from you.
Regards,
Kirti